Narrative+Writing



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Bertha had finally succumbed the heat of the day. She wondered, not for the first time, whether Bernard would notice her sneaking down to the corner dairy. He had lactose intolerance and therefore was not able to eat the deliciously soft ice cream. "Oh dear," she thought as another bead of sweat cascaded down her forehead, "I can't resist...surely he won't notice...". She imagined the sweet icy treat sliding down her throat. "That's it!" she thought as she unstuck herself from the linoleum. "Bernard," she called loudly, "I am just popping down to the dairy to grab some bread". With an anxious feeling and devious thought she grabbed the car keys.

- Miss F

“Slurp” I took a large lick of my newly bought ice cream it sent a sudden chill down my spine as it rolled down my throat. As I walk through the park I felt all the flavors of the lush chocolate ice cream come forward like the flame after eating a chili.As I near the end of the ice cream and take the last lick it gave me this feeling like the one you would get after diving into a pool on a hot summers day and having to get back out again “mom can I get another ice cream”. - Blake

"Please don't eat me!!!" Screamed the Ice Cream, "Im to young to die, I only came out of the factory yesterday" The spoon dove down to catch its prey and the ice cream was sliced in half by the savage blade and began to bleed chocolate and caramel ripples. The caramel and chocolate popcorn leapt into the bowl to shield the dying ice cream, but it was no use. - Zach

Mum, can I please have an ice-cream? Coz’ it’s real hot and I just unpacked this dishwasher for you.” Shouted Fred“I suppose sweetheart, **only** because you unpacked the dishwasher without making a fuss though.” Shouted back Fred’s mum Leah.“Yusss, thanks mum!” said Fred, pleased that he got to //finally// taste one of those delicious new Freddo-Frog ice creams. Fred ran to the kitchen and skidded across the floor, stopping right in front of the freezer. He yanked open the door and rummaged around to find the unopened box of //Freddo Frog// ice creams and ripped open the box and grabbed the first one he saw. . .“Mum, these are soooo YUM!” Fred shouted to his mother as he bit a chunk of the ice-cold frog shaped chocolate ice cream, it was like eating heaven.“If they are that yum Fred, can you please grab your dear old mum one ?” Leah asked her son who was meanwhile taking another humongous bite.“I suppose” said Fred with a mouthful of chocolate ice cream. He grabbed another one out of the freezer and ran to his mum who was sitting outside reading on the pool deck. “Thanks sweetheart” Said Leah, taking the ice cream from her son. “S’ok mum” shrugged Fred “Oh my gosh!!! Mum its got chocolate sauce inside! It’s the best ice cream EVER!” shouted Fred as he walked back inside the house. - Taria


 * The sun was gleaming down on the Mr Wippy truck as the kids ran up to get the sweet sensation of a cold cream running down there hot little throats.As Mr Bean was about to grab his ice cream teddy started to cry Mr bean asked whats wrong teddy Teddy simply replyed with your standing on my toes.**
 * -Simon**

As I bite down down on this Delicious peas of creamy ice. As the coldness of it goes down my throat, I feal a pleasing tingle in my spine as I take another and another bike of my double scoop of gooy caramel, ice cream. Just to find my self running around shouting "BRAIN FREEZE." I'm holding my fore head as the cold chill freezes my brain, without looking I trip over a pear of shoos my sister left on the path, I drop my ice cream and lland face first into a wet, disgusting, horrible smelling, mud pit. I get up, tern around to find my Mum, Dad, and two of my three sisters lying on the flour, wetting them selfs luffing. I step foreword to pick up what use to be my ice cream, and is now a hunk of mushed, mud flaverd, gunk. I walk back into my house to fut the gunk in the bin, and go to get in the shower. I come out of the shower after about Ten minutes of scrubbing, to again finding my family luffing at me as I walk through the room, down the hallway and into my bedroom. -Richard

The day had come I was going to be the first person in the WORLD to taste the new icecream flavour from Jack and Jimmy’s ice cream company. After last week when I became the world record holder for the most ice cream eaten in 1 minute. I was thrilled when I got the call that they wanted me yes me Riley Featherstone to be the first ever in the whole universe to taste their ice cream! The whole world was watching, with news reporters and cameras surrounding me I looked at the bowl infront of me filled with purple and green swilry ice cream that was fresh from the first batch. I took the first bite with more than a billion eyes watching me. Shivers went down my spine as I tasted the creamy ice cream that tasted like something from heaven. I sat there as I enjoyed the ice cream still in my mouth as I thought how much easier it would have been to break the record if I was eating this ice cream! - Zoe

-Drip- -Psssst- As the boy’s saliva hit the Icy cold top of the ice cream drawer. The boy gazed at the ice cream as it cruelly stared back at him with its massive variety of assorted colourings and flavourings, the boy glanced back outside to see the blazing sun beating down on the now burning concrete. He grimaced as he looked back at the drawer of glorious ice creams, -Drip- another drop of the boy’s saliva hit the top of drawer –Phssst- went the door of the drawer as the boy slid it open the boy stepped backwards as the big waft of cool Ice creamy air. The boy grabbed his favourite ice cream and held it upwards in a worshipping manor as he walked to the counter. The boy clattered his money onto the worn bench that had once been a dinner table. “That’ll be two fifty” said the cashier who had now put down the paper she was reading and motioned with her hand as if to say hand me the money. The boy ran out the door and yelped as his bare feet hit the scolding concrete he stepped into the shade and ripped off the colourful covering of the ice cream and noticed that it was pretty big for two fifty. The boy stuck his dry tongue out and – Slurp!-. - Matt “Please, hurry up and eat me! Get It over and done with!” The delicious cold hokey pokey ice cream thought as it stared into the menacing black hole boarded by dry cracked lips. The massive monster, that was called a “human’s, teeth were gleaming brightly in the sunlight coming down to pierce off his first bite. I had always wondered how it felt to be eaten.

“oh yummy!” I said as I looked down at the mouthwateringly delicious ice cream with the rich French vanilla ice cream and the massive hokey pokey pieces. Mine and New Zealand most favorite kiwi ice cream. I bit into the luscious, delectable deliciousness that was MY ice cream. It was delectably cold and so, so refreshing on this burning hot day. It slid down my throat and wondered how it would feel to be eaten. - Hamish

Suzy took a large bite from her boysenberry ice-cream, letting it melt on the surface of her tongue. It felt icy and wet as it soaked in; eventually she swallowed the melted cream and started her cycle again. It was the first time in months that Suzy had scoffed down a delicious boysenberry ice-cream, as her parents did not approve of her eating teeth yellowing sweets. Her parents didn’t even know she was eating it at that very moment. She’d spent her pocket money on a triple scoop boysenberry, goody-gum drop, and extra choc chocolate ice-cream, which didn’t last very long when the park hobo asked her to share. “I wish I had an unlimited amount of ice-cream.”Suzy sighed sadly. She looked down at the ice-cream cone wedged between her tiny hands, and to her surprise a brand new, triple scoop of ice-cream appeared on her cone!!! - Amber

"OOH! That's chilly" says the ice cream man as he is pulling out a scoop of ice cream from the freezer. He plops it on the cone and gives it to the little boy and he gives him some money and says "thanks". "No problem" replies the ice cream man. "MMMMMM" says the boys. "It tastes nice and it is cold" he thinks as he licks it with pleasure. Great for after a long day of cricket in the sun. Suddenly a boy comes zooming down the hill on a bike and the little boy with a fright drops the Delicious ice cream. "AHHH" screams the boy. "My ice cream". The ice cream splattered on the steaming hot path is screaming "I'm melting, I'm melting. The boy walks off sad with a tear drop in his eye and goes home. - Alex

The sun was so hot that I thought I was going to melt. I was walking the dog to the lake because mum was making me to help cool the dog down by going for a swim. The only problem is that people are not allowed to swim in the lake any more as someone drowned last year. Lucky mum gave me some money to buy an ice-cream from the lakeside shop. When I got there my dog begged me to let him go in the water so as soon as she heard the clip of the lead he was gone. Then I went in to the shop I got a 7 scoop ice-cream one scoop of each flavour. When I took the first bite it was like I was in the South Pole eating a big chocolate bar then my brain froze. I went out to check on my dog and I could not find him - Sean

"Uh oh!" I think to myself, as I see a big, Pink, slobbering tounge Move twoards me "I lived a good life in the tub, but now its time for me to face the world" It's coming closer "Brace for impact!" I think to myself, then I feel a big wet lick, almost shoving me off the cone "Yuck!" there goes all my delicious Gumdrops, Bubble gum flavoured ice-cream. But when I thought it couldn't get any worse, suddenly the hand that once held my beautiful Waffel cone is gone, and before I could think twice on whats happening I feel a big gust of wind then a big Crack! "Why can I see those weird things that p- pe- people were on there..,. whats the word... Feet, Uh oh! ones coming closer and Closer And CLOSER! aggggh!!" Crunch!. - Claudia

It was a really hot day and it was 45 degrease calculus there was no good ice cream shop around the closest was two blocks away. I didn’t think I could make it there I stayed under the shade all the way when I got there I grabbed the biggest ice cream they had a quadruple scoop.  It was two scoops of French vanilla and two scoops of wild berry it was in a waffle cone with chocolate sauce. I loved it sooooo much it was cold and delicious, it was a flavor sensation. I was under the shade for about half an hour just to eat it. -Ethan

